Preparation for operation

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Holding one of the highest populations on planet Earth, Brooklyn is home to a very diverse group of people. Everything from Hispanics, to Blacks, to Italians, to Polish, to whatever resides here. The income brackets vary so much here that it makes Brooklyn the perfect city to turn a hustler into a millionaire without leaving the block.
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Preparation for operation

Post by Frank Luzzato » August 17th, 2017, 10:48 pm

It was a late rainy night, like most of the nights, the streets are empty, you call still hear the noise of Brooklyn, the car horns and some fella chasing his girlfriend in the house. Sam's bar wasn't really full, few guys getting drunk, some just sitting down thinking how to pay their debts, while Frank was in his usual table, sipping his usual Whiskey glass with the phone next to it and a pack of cigarettes on it. His tracksuit was in the laundry that day, he wore his black leather jacket and a "Lacoste" shirt beneath it, black well tailored pants and his black shiny shoe. He always took care of his appearance, he always believed that appearance tells a lot about the person himself, so he always wanted to give a good impression of himself to people. He was thinking of his life, how did he reach here and how's he's gonna take advantage of what his life became. All he was thinking of is that bar he wanted, he even dreamed about it at night, talked about it all the time, he was obsessed. He was looking for a big score, but he isn't big enough for a big score, he's new in the business he doesn't know enough people, just his small circle of close friends and associates, and couple friends. Jimmy's safe, it was always stuck in Jimmy's mind, he always wanted the money there, even when Jimmy opened it Frank stared at it like a zombie. But then again they shouldn't get caught, he needed tools a crew with skills, a Lock smith to unlock the safe, a lot of preparations to be made. He takes his phone and texts each person of his crew to cancel their plans for the few coming days for the operation. Frank went to his uncle's place, he money thirst made him walk fast like a penguin. He went to his bedroom and grabbed a dufflebag and went out of the apartment. Hopefully, the neighbors hardware store was still open, it was Frank's happy day. He walked fast under the rain towards the hardware store, with a wide smile on his face , money made him smile, made him happy but it wasn't never sufficient. A small chinese guy was at the counter, he had all type of hard ware in the store, even tho it was such a small place. "Alright small guy" Says Frank while putting the unzipped dufflebag on the counter, -"Get me a lock pick set, three pairs of gloves, and a TSM safe manipulator, make it quick please"-. The asian guy stared at Frank in suspicion, then moved to get the tools. Frank was aware that the asian guy suspected his intentions, he probably knows the tools needed to crack a safe, so Frank goes -"A client forgot the password for his safe, needed to tools to crack it for him"-. The asian man nods and grabs the tools, putting them into the dufflebag then unzips it. Frank grabbed few bills from his inner jacket's pocket, and put them on the counter and nods at the counter guy with a smile before leaving. The operation was playing again and again in Frank's mind, he got it all planned, he thought about it till he slept that night.

Requests:
Lock pick set
3x Pairs of gloves
TSM safe manipulator
5800$ paid to the hardware store

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Re: Preparation for operation

Post by Magnus » August 17th, 2017, 11:45 pm

A few line breaks would be heavenly... run your stories through spell check, you've got run on sentences everywhere. I'm not really a stickler for proper punctuation or other grammatical errors but it makes it hard to follow. You end up reading a sentence two or three times to grab the intention, you want it to be clear to the reader from the beginning. In any event, since your paying for it, I don't have too much to complain about... looking forward to the actual safe job :)

Requests: All Granted
Lock pick set
3x Pairs of gloves
TSM safe manipulator
5800$ paid to the hardware store

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