The Fishing Pole


Chicago, the 'Second City', is the greatest city in all of the world, so fuck you NYC. This is where all of the major decisions, from city hall politics, to Greektown college-educated crime, and board-room semantics take place. Downtown certainly has a lot to offer within it's four square miles. With everything from breathtaking skyscrapers, elegant dining, high-end retail, there is a little something for everyone.

Home of places like University Village, Little Italy, and bordering suburbs like Oak Park, Melrose Park, and Forest Park, the West Side is where most of the middle class dwell, with bad neighborhoods like Austin mirroring the city's South Side. This side of town is where you'll find the most mix of criminal, with the Mafia, Latin Gangs, Irish Gangs, and others fighting for territory. With a plethora of residential neighborhoods, some worse off than others, you're bound to find some excitement.
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Re: The Fishing Pole

Post by DRACULE » March 9th, 2017, 7:16 am


- Your enjoyment / feedback
I enjoyed the way you described how he treated his inner addict. Images like that you tend to describe nicely.
You also portrait the goodness in ”bad people”, explaining Reynas sense of responsibility twards her community. It adds dimension and makes the characters interesting.

- Reyna as a (super duper valuable) contact

- Access to use her crew when needed
Granted. But remember – they're not your NPC's. They follow Reynas orders.

- [x2] Silenced 9mm from Reyna

- Money and Coke from the briefcase - whatever you think this piece is worth
Your cut is $20,000 and three kilos of coke.


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